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jcp200817
Carlos Perez
United States, NC, Dobson

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Unttilted 3

I don't remember
seeing
breathing
living
next to anyone
as beautiful
as you.

You have literally
fixed
patched
changed
my life
in a way that
nobody has.

I want to
sink
soak
die
in the
essence of
you.

One of these days I'm gonna
run
jump
fly
out to you
and take
you away.

We will live
joyfully
peacefully
happily
ever after
in a world
were only we exist.

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xxkrowxx Comment by: xxkrowxx - 2008-08-16 10:55
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dude... i absolutely love this one! it really hits you in a way thats unexplainable... luv it!!!!!
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