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kstewie
kelly stewart
United States, ca, los angeles

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A Beautiful Day

Walked out of my house today
Maybe I was thrown out but thats okay
Carrying my life on my back
Heading towards the train coming down the train track
The only thing that I miss now
Is my mothers crying
I love that sound

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sonia Comment by: sonia - 2006-03-06 22:39
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nice twist at the end, and a nice rhythm, I can relate to the theme perfectly.
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