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LocustsCoatRack
Brent Appling
United States, South Carolina, Columbia

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Memory is a Drug

I wish I could chew on
these time capsules, blue pills
and poodle legs have replaced
the two-wheeled weaving between
white and yellow lines, so the child will
visit before it's too late.

The bride of Frankenstein is pale
as ghost, but not everywhere, her
tanned acceptance is well hidden
within a large burlap sack that obliterates
any possible figure.

A Tiananmen Square martyr smiles under
the steal treads of a desert tank
with a red star on its side, while my
five year old takes a header over neon
green handle bars, but martyrdom
is out of the question.

Lincoln smiling at me as I pitch a
wardrobe fit at his feet, lacquering
a red face on the yuppies standing
above me in impatience, intolerance,
and shame.

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languidluna Comment by: languidluna - 2008-08-19 10:06
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tanned acceptance :)
lflwriter Comment by: lflwriter - 2008-08-13 16:12
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I noticed the stanza about the Tiananmen Square martyr and thought of the protest organizers that all had their visas to escape China from the CIA before the event was even staged. This was another one sort of like Kent State.

I liked the line about "yuppies standing above me in impatience, intolerance and shame." Hits at the truth.
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