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Lenny
Lenny Gazbowski
United Kingdom, Liverpool

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Freedom Fading

like vultures parading around a dying man
politicians devise yet another plan
to take our freedom until eroded bare
they'll do it under the pretex that they care

(C)Lenny Gazbowski

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Lenny Comment by: Lenny - 2008-08-25 12:50
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I once stood for election in the UK, well three times!Never won!
Fouchega Comment by: Fouchega - 2008-08-20 22:31
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Great piece of social commentary here - I liked the imagery.
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-08-17 11:49
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So true, while we walk around with pockets full of dust! ~T
BengiLisa Comment by: BengiLisa - 2008-08-16 07:05
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I loved the last line. So short of a poem, yet so powerful :)
Lenny Comment by: Lenny - 2008-08-15 13:47
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yo! thanks dude! appreciate the comments!
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