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Still thinking
deborshi brahmachari
India, Delhi

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A ripple and a paper boat

you ask me to get back on track?
I wud ruther be a 'setback'
will lose myself till I am found
till then ,its all round and round
I am a wonderer ,let me float
like a ripple and a paper boat !

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Still thinking Comment by: Still thinking - 2008-08-21 09:37
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yea it was a funny Text message I wrote to a girl ,for she wanted to she me organised

first thing that came in my mind was
"If I was organised I would be daigerous" lol
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-08-21 08:54
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Love the self-belief you stress in this Deborshi. ~T
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