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alcarty
Al Carty
United States, New Mexico, Milan

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Crash Course

The time had come, the turning-point in my daughter’s life. Her sixteenth birthday approached, and I looked forward to that with somewhat the same feeling I had when waiting for my draft notice. I knew the present she wanted; driving lessons. She looked forward to her school's Driver Education, but she wanted old Dad to give a crash course in the meantime, just to have a little jump on the other kids.

My vehicle was a Jeep pickup, stick-shift, oversize wheels, spring-stiffeners, lack of power steering; this meant nothing to her. She got the beast started, successfully found first gear, let out the clutch, and we were underway, bucking, jumping, grinding. Fortunately we lived in the country, so no one witnessed the event. After experiencing all the gears she parked, beaming.

“Thanks, Dad!” she grinned. While she studied the driver’s manual, I fixed a drink, exhausted, but proud.

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alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-08-19 08:22
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Thanks for the comments and suggestion, Vicky. And you might want to lay in a supply of Valium to help cushion the adventure.
vlclasby Comment by: vlclasby - 2008-08-18 21:35
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Oh my, Al! Is this what I have to look forward to? Maybe I should start drinking now, with only three years to go.

Loved the sweet sentiment here - daddy's little girl in big, manly truck. Getting through the gears and not winding up in a ditch - an accomplishment worth celebrating with a Jack and Coke.

This sentence read a bit awkwardly, to me anyway: The school program of Driver’s Education she looked forward to, but she wanted old Dad to give a crash course...
I would suggest - She looked forward to the school's Driver's Education program, but wanted old Dad...
Just my opinion. Very nice story. My dad came home white as a sheet the first time he tried to teach me to drive.
alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-08-17 08:10
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Wanda, spring stiffeners, or overload springs, are extra-thick leaves that are added to the rear springs when a camper might be carried. They also make the vehicle ride higher. Thanks.
alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-08-17 08:06
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Phil and Les- That day I understood what my dad went through. Thanks.
alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-08-17 08:03
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Something like that, Arley. I don't make a good passenger, to start with, but to ride with a teenager? Panic time! Thanks.
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