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fang13bea
Hayley McNichol
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United States, Michigan, Farwell

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Fall

I’ll eat your heart out
But you won’t care
You’ll be too far gone
To take this dare

When you’re falling down
I won’t try to catch you at all
I’ll let you slip
And I’ll watch you fall

And you’ll be dead
You’ll be gone
Just like the leaves
Covering my lawn

Your eyes will glaze over
And you’ll breathe your last breath
I won’t look at you
In your undignified death

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thatonekid Comment by: thatonekid - 2008-08-28 02:11
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what to do when there's no one left to kill?
hannah01zack Comment by: hannah01zack - 2008-08-26 20:09
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this poem is amazing.
it makes since.
it rhymes.
and its totally beautiful yo.
keep up the awesome work dude i like reading you stuff.
FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy - 2008-08-18 18:43
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This is effing amazing!
I LOVE it!
^_^
Psyfyman81 Comment by: Psyfyman81 - 2008-08-16 22:57
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Wow, that's hardcore. But, then again you gotta do what you gotta do...
GreenIce Comment by: GreenIce - 2008-08-16 22:42
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Damn..serious...to take the very thing that keeps one alive..and not care....brutal..but...i actual like it....thank you
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