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misplacedmind
Steven Hand
United Kingdom, southlanarkshire, carluke

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The JungleSpeedway

Deepening breath
Heart heaving on my chest
Diversion of blood from my liver to my head
Digestion neglected as I shiver and sweat
My limbs are erratic
Clearer vision seeing red
The jungle speedway
Immediate danger
Veering off the edge
Steered by a stranger
Emotional blueprints
Protective response
Supposedly clueless to the consequent storm

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Before I Wake Comment by: Before I Wake - 2008-08-16 23:46
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Well done, a vivid portrayal of the excitement and adrenaline of the moment. Keep up the good work.
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