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What about these:
Publication
Exhilaration
You've also repeated Inspiration three times. Maybe substitue something else. I depend on inspiration to write, but .... J |
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Comment by: Bourne - 2007-02-05 04:22
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No need to worry about too much praise here.
Inspiration
Desperation
Masturbation
Incantation |
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Comment by: fredav - 2006-07-16 06:47
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| this was nice. the tone is good, well used. i completely agree with the last stanza. youl ook back at it, you feel proud, thus, you celebrate. good work! |
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| That was great. You must have a good knowledge of words and writing these poems are usually harder then they look. Good work :) |
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Comment by: - 2006-03-10 10:42
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| I like the use of "inspiration" because of it's dual meaning...Funny, the dual meaning just dawned on me this week! To me the use of that word gives the poem a lot of life. It's like saying that writing (or being creative in any other sense) is part of being alive. :) Excellent idea! |
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