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Wanda Clevenger
United States, Illinois, Hettick

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MICK & JERRY

Third date . . . no more waiting. Dinner, drinks, dancing at 54, and tonight was the night. No woman put him off before.

Mick had it all: millions, a Jag, his hair. Jerry should be grateful. And if all went as planned, she would be. He grabbed his Gold Card and slipped a toothbrush into his suit breast pocket.

Rock on, baby.

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WLC Comment by: WLC - 2008-09-01 13:02
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Thanks Karen. When you're that rich you could probably buy somebody else's scalp if necessary, heck their whole head.

But nobody, and I mean nobody, made the JAG connection to his last name!!! I'm so dissolutioned.
karjon Comment by: karjon - 2008-09-01 12:31
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'his hair' has had me giggling non-stop.

Really enjoyed this one, Wanda. And definitely get to NY if you can - even I've been there.

Cheers

Karen
WLC Comment by: WLC - 2008-08-31 20:18
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No kidding! You'd think he'd have a wad of cash in his pocket all the time, huh. Thanks Karl.
krademacher Comment by: krademacher Online- 2008-08-31 20:16
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Only a gold card? pah! How pedestrian. :-)

Sounds like Mick might have all he needs with a mirror. Good one, Wanda.
WLC Comment by: WLC - 2008-08-28 17:57
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:) xxx
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