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"Angel Eyes" Part 2

A quick note before you begin reading, there is some content following that may not be suitable for children. You have been warned.

...As my senses began to scream at me to get away, to begin running, my mind told me it wasn't worth it. I had just lost the only thing that mattered in my life ' there was no point in living anymore.

The man threw me down to the ground and straddled me, and I suddenly remembered all of the times I had heard about some woman getting gang raped in the park. I was about to become one of those victims. And suddenly, I knew that I didn't want to die like this. If I was going to die, I would do it by myself, and make sure no one got any pleasure out of doing it. The man put his face close to mine and said softly, 'This might hurt just a little.' And that's when I spat in his face.

He reeled back in surprise, wiping his face roughly with the edge of his jacket, and looked back at me. 'You're gonna wish you'd have never done that.' He growled venomously as he removed his jacket and tossed it towards one of the men. I saw a particularly vicious looking man catch it and casually hang it over one of his arms, watching me lustily with blood-shot eyes. As the man straddling me leaned close I smelled the rank stench of cheap cologne and felt the rough stubble of his unshaven face on mine. 'Now you'll find out how it is to truly be fucked.' He whispered with a soft maniacal laugh.

The man above me roughly tore off my shirt as I tried futily to get from beneath him, anything to try and escape the second nightmare which had worked its way into this night. I continued beating violently against his chest as he unzipped my jeans and threw them to the side of a large dumpster. 'You!' he yelled at one of the larger men of the group, 'hold her arms and make sure she don't draw any unwanted attention.' The man simply nodded and made his way slowly towards me, walking strangely.

As he kneeled above my head his eyes searched down my bare body and he muttered, 'Gee miss I ain't seen a purty thing like you in awhile.' I only stared up at him with burning tears brimming around my eyes, and felt the other man on top of me remove my underwear and bra. As I heard him whistle softly the man kneeling above my head grasped both of my arms with one of his massive hands and covered my mouth firmly with the other. 'Oh God I'm hard just lookin' at it boys, this one is gonna prove to be a real catch.' The one straddling me groaned lustfully. He removed his pants slowly, revealing a large erection, and spread his body across mine as I felt tears trickle slowly down my face.

So this was it.

'There's no need to be cryin'.' he said as his rancid breath washed over my face. I continued to struggle fiercely against the man's weight as he worked his way slowly down my body, kissing down my neck as I closed my eyes in hope of waking up soon from this terrible dreamland.

As I opened my terrified eyes I saw that there was a large shadow towering behind the man, silent as the night itself. It drew a small rectangular object from beneath the jacket it was wearing and aimed it at the man who was on top of me, still keeping its eerie presence unknown. I felt myself tense instinctively and squeeze my eyes shut again, not believing I was going to be heart-broken, raped, and shot in the same night.

To be continued...

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Chesterjeeb Comment by: Chesterjeeb - 2006-03-08 14:20
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Brilliant... Priest, I've tried to read several uploads tonight, and my concentration has waned as I've read them.

But this was very different.

I'm not going to bore you with any spelling or grammar mistakes (and the reason for that is I couldn't find any, and I couldn't find any because the story is so strong and I wasn't even looking for them.)

More please and soon. Top stuff.
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