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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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Wish List (I Want To Be In Love)

I want to wake up
with a silly smile
and a belly rumbling
growling
with anticipation
I want to feel romance
I want to take a chance
and dance wildly
…gladly…
……madly…
to a tune
only you and I
can hear

I want to lay down
under midnight skies
that are faded and dimmed
by the stars in my eyes
as I contemplate
with contented sighs
the blood rushing
through my veins
as you paralyze
with ice blue hot shot
desires
staring me down
bringing me round
to your way of thinking

I don’t want to think
I want to drink
stumbling drunk
with the heady wine
of desire
lit up and on fire
when you
whisper my name
lifting me higher
than I ever thought
I could float
adrift on the boat
of ecstasy
fantasy
just you and me
…yeah…

I want to be a song
sweet on your lips
a soft melody sung
I want to be an instrument
fine tuned and
high strung
beautifully
strummed
played by
skilled fingers
stroking
plucking
at notes
never …
…before heard

I want to go to bed
counting the hours
and minutes
until I hear your voice
see your face
lay soft and worn
in your warm embrace
knowing that if
I never woke up
my life would be
sweet
complete
filled with
everything and
anything I ever
lost
…and found …

Yeah, that’s what I want

I want to be …
…in ...
……Love.

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-09-11 20:30
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Stillthinking, I thank you for your comments~
Still thinking Comment by: Still thinking - 2008-09-11 03:39
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Very beautifully sung.From the morning sun to the night's sky to the romantic wine to the sexy bed ....its was all love love love...very nice
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-09-10 18:17
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'I was re-reading this and now I'm seeing a sad lovely soul wanting to reach out, wanting to give her best, seeking the elusive.
This is timeless poetry.'

Thank you June. That is a beautiful compliment. I think anytime we are stymied in our ability to give love to our chosen recipient, it does make for a sad person filled with so much love to give, yes?
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-09-10 18:15
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Tony, you'd be surprised at how easy it is for some to refuse the gift of love no matter how freely it is offered~

June, sing along my friend, poetry is only a song without music, yes?
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-09-10 18:10
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Redtwin, thank you, I think we all would love to have that~

Carey, I so appreciate your words, thank you~
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