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darkbluegirl
acid chick
Romania

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Dear September

6:30
A nightmare disrupts my sleep
Rainy September day
I didn’t imagine the tears
You had in store for me.
Coldness was creeping in my veins
Water drops were my hitting umbrella
And yet I waited till you gave me
A ray of light.
I thought it would stay like that
Till midnight brought a different charm,
But no, deceitful September
My eyes changed places with your clouds
And I shed tears
Tears of loneliness
Of failure
Of fear.
In this roller coaster called life
Once again
I’ m going down.
But it’s alright
Don’t break my fall
Cause even though
I am still hurting
I shall soon rise,
Dear September,
Like the sun
You never gave me.

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kc0003 Comment by: kc0003 - 2008-11-01 13:51
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what's the line...wake me up when september's gone...yeah just like that
Comment by: - 2008-09-22 22:50
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Dear Romanian Acid Chic;

This is remarkable poetry, and believe me, I am picky with style. The poem bring me to a "place" in life that I am all too familiar with. When I arrive I catch myself saying
"Here I am again...In this place - so void."
I am Slavic too...perhaps this is the connection, because I love your style.
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