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felinalunekavi
felina lune kavi
United States, Nebraska, Omaha

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Pinned-down and Prostituted

to some i am
some doll-faced hippie
thinking lazy thoughts
and dreaming impractical.

to some i seem
a threat with thoughts
thick as thieves
up invisible sleeves.

to some i sound
stuck in a world
surrounding myself
like quicksand.

to some i look
sweet, like home
away from home,
soft as silky sheets.

to some i feel
like lively rhythm
drumming heartbeats
in rapid rhapsodies.

to some i appear
out of nowhere
and fall in and out
of line before a blink.

and still i wonder, how do you want me?

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ariqm Comment by: ariqm - 2008-09-22 14:14
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well... I, want you to always be this sweet and lovely a poet... great words! kudos!
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