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The Desktop Chair

This is still a monstrous work in progress that needs to be longer and better, but I think I have a better idea of where I want to go with it now. Special thanks to Meghan for a marathon critique session and general advice.

The Desktop Chair

Looking at the skin stretched
across her waist, her hands
play at me and at once
I am desperate
for your fingers over my skin
for the pulling of your body tight against me
before, during, after, all day
the odd touches that bend me
like a plant, growing
toward the sun.
I am a predator;
of hands and feet and the contour of faces,
of thin and thick hair
and the sweat that drips off us
when we've finished.
I am a collector of body parts.
I claim them with my lips and fingers.
I am desperate
for the hips that portrude
just enough
to grab and use,
a tool to push and pull the rest,
desperate for them
but not for you.

The Desktop Chair

Looking at the skin stretched
across her waist, her hands
play at me and at once
I am desperate
for your fingers over my skin
for the pulling of your body tight against me
before, during, after, all day
the odd touches that bend me
like a plant, growing
toward the sun, a predator
of hands and feet and the contour of faces,
of thin and thick hair
and the sweat that drips off us
when we've finished.
I am a collector of body parts.
I claim them with my lips and fingers, desperate
for the hips that portrude
just enough
to grab and use,
a tool to push and pull the rest,
desperate for them
but not for you.

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Comment by: - 2006-06-01 17:10
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I do no know what kind of chair you have, but tell me right away so i can order one. Very sensual in a lazy sexy way. Again...where...the chair. You have great use of adjectives to describe a chair.
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2006-03-26 19:12
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Awesome! loved it. Very sexy...but not desperate! good work.
Comment by: - 2006-03-23 16:16
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Whoa....sexy poem...whew...what can I say..umm great work. - Leah
denisedee Comment by: denisedee - 2006-03-22 06:06
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YES! YES! YES! this is way tighter, tactile, and sensual. Keep going.
wellnessthruplay Comment by: wellnessthruplay - 2006-03-16 07:55
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This is amazing work. I love that a writer can workand rework a piece in so many ways, each one inevitably sounding great but then there is this moment when it just fits. This is beautiful. It all flows. I got sucked into the passion, into the moment that you were creating, this desire and the bam..."not for you". It reminded me of a movie scene, were an ex lover would lean over in an appeared fit of passion and slowly wisper this desire, this wish and then walk away with it "not for you" The ultimate in a tease and the ultimate in revenge. I hope my ramble made sense.
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