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shaft
Matthew Jackson
United Kingdom, Lancashire, Preston

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Haikuses

These are three seperate Haiku's.

Deep Brown

As I look into your
Deep dark, brown and empty eyes
I see you trapped.

Freedom?

You've been strung along,
Expanded expectations,
You're waiting in chains.

Workers

Bee's gather nectar,
To feed the fat bitch queens greed,
Far more than she'll need.

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Cherley Comment by: Cherley - 2006-06-25 11:02
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I liked Freedom the best.
Comment by: - 2006-06-02 16:47
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Love it especially the last piece.
Lullaby Libra Comment by: Lullaby Libra - 2006-04-23 11:02
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"fat bitch queen," I am in love.
Brindle Comment by: Brindle - 2006-04-10 12:38
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Yeah, 'Workers' is the best one here. Keep up the good work!
tcbswan Comment by: tcbswan - 2006-04-07 21:41
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I'm not a poet but I love this poem! (three in one) especially You've been strung along,
Expanded expectations,
You're waiting in chains.
Can't give you any technical input--enjoyed the verse.
Tracey
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