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Mirages
Mirages often are, I find,
Images of a heated mind.
Reflections that I sometimes feel
Are something slightly more than real.
Gaining strength from thirst and drought,
Even earth is turned about,
Seeing seas where there’s just sand.
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| This is lovely though I agree with skypoetone I was hoping for at least one more line. beautiful piece regardless. |
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| I think since mirage is a synonym for visions, that the rule could be bent. Good thing it's not my call or you'd be on the short list for sure. This is an excellent poem. |
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| Great strength in the feel of this one, Phil. You rebel...you just couldn't conform to rules, aye? "Images of a heated mind." Love that line.:D |
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Comment by: alien Online- 2008-09-27 10:09
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| Hah - I like this one a lot ut I can't include it with the judging, as you know. Well done anyway on a cracking poem. |
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| I wanted this to go on... I could imagine a few more lines as I came to the last. Always great to read you. ~T |
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