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alcarty
Al Carty
United States, New Mexico, Milan

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Better Late Than Never

The guests watched uncomfortably as the bride and her father waited. The minister checked his watch.

“Oh, Daddy, how could he?”

“He’ll be here, sweetheart. Knowing Bob, there’s a good reason.”

A young man in jeans and sweatshirt burst through the doors, breathing heavily.

“Everything went wrong; car stolen, tux, cell-phone, ring inside!”

“Just say yes, boy, the obstetrician’s waiting.”

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alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-09-27 15:41
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Mitchell, thanks again for reading and commenting. I guess reading everything O. Henry wrote made me aware of endings. He was the master.
flack47 Comment by: flack47 - 2008-09-27 10:30
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HA!

Again with the awesome ending. I love a story with a punch line.

Well done
-M
alcarty Comment by: alcarty - 2008-09-27 09:13
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Nora and Jason, thanks for reading and commenting. I hope they have time to make it through the ceremony.
JNeas Comment by: JNeas - 2008-09-26 18:47
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I love the groom's dialog. The way it is punctuated conveys how winded he is. Very clever.
Nora Comment by: Nora - 2008-09-26 18:25
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Nice one, Al. You nailed it!
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