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MoShnep
Mo Shnepkoff
United States, NY, NY

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Joe, Ray, Me

Joe, a queer – a female veneer;
Ray, drops the smoking gun!
Me, a name I call Mo Shnepp;
Far, Ray you better run.
So, do you think Joe’s brain is dead?
Lon, a-gloat for lover, Joe.
Tea, exotic smoke from Fred.
That brings us back to...poor fuckin’ Joe.

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kamereon Comment by: kamereon - 2008-11-06 20:43
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Man do I love reading some Mo Shnepp. You have a profound way of crashing to an end - Hail Mo Shnepp, master of the spectacular vernacular!!
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-09-27 18:00
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Good! Good use of an old song for a modern meaning. Well done. Best wishes.
MoShnep Comment by: MoShnep - 2008-09-27 17:20
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Sometimes I really fuckin amaze myself!
Doe what I mean Deer?
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