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Scrissy
Faith Snater
United States

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Second Thoughts

There are some mornings between
waking and the weather report
when thinking of you brings scarcely
a twinge; I can even begin
to hallucinate a world in which
it is possible to forget
how to love you. The day drones
on; by nightfall the stars rise
beyond my reach and I have become
lucid enough to mourn
having never gone with you --
not even once.

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-10-11 20:39
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Well done. I enjoy it very much. Best wishes.
Scrissy Comment by: Scrissy - 2008-10-10 10:10
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Thanks for reading, Daniel. This piece was more difficult than most to write.
dannykurl Comment by: dannykurl - 2008-10-10 02:23
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very, very impressive work
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