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Scrissy
Faith Snater
United States

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Sitting on the Grass to Read

April granted me
breezes sweet from Southern fields,
gossiping of rain.

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Scrissy Comment by: Scrissy - 2008-10-14 06:20
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Thank you, Lenny & David! :)
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-10-14 05:37
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Very good, Scrissy.
Lenny Comment by: Lenny - 2008-10-13 15:21
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elegant!
Scrissy Comment by: Scrissy - 2008-10-13 14:14
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Thanks, Apryl. That smell of rain made it hard to concentrate about whatever-it-was that I was reading, lol!
edgarallanpoet Comment by: edgarallanpoet Online- 2008-10-13 14:08
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Another good one. Very clever, love the last line. you made me smell the rain coming.
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