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canne mills
canne mills
United Kingdom, London

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punk.

a new view,
of new eyes.
a new love, and hate of leave.

take me back, take me back.

..and the people, rid their flaws.
their new ways, their toxication
runs shallow.

dive back, dive in.
free of current,
and drink deep.

find peace.
comfort.

peace of mind.

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pinzerino Comment by: pinzerino - 2008-10-23 17:01
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like the repetition and use of water imagery
Lenny Comment by: Lenny - 2008-10-13 22:38
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excellent emotion and imagery,liked this a lot,
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