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Lenny
Lenny Gazbowski
United Kingdom, Liverpool

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More Morphine !!!

I've got those
hospital blues
and I'm so confused
as my drugged mind
desperately searches
for clues to aid
the doctors in healing
my battered body
which they have all
criticised for poor
workmanship
but hey! I say
thats not my fault
I arrived in this
place by default

(C)2008 Lenny Gazbowski

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jagainst Comment by: jagainst - 2008-11-22 07:43
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I like this...the last three lines stuck out. I assume you meant 'this place' to be the hospital, but I took 'this place' to mean the world. Both work well.
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