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gothtearsdarknes
Crimson Brassfield
United States, I Stand Alone, In The Dark

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Alone

I've walked through walls of darkness
Only to discover you've gone on the rollercoatser of bliss
And left me behind
Now I'm just a whisper wandering the halls of your mind
I'm finding it hard to meet the rising sun each day
Pain leaping in me like hyperactive death
I can never truly say I'm okay
You've shattered my faith, soul, trust, heart, and life
Reduced me to numb pain beyond tears
Not quite beyond feeling
I feel the anger and hurt all too well
Did you cast away everything, every moment, every glance
In that one second?
You have damaged me beyond repair
I don't want this pain any longer
But it keeps coming courtesy of you
Now I am just a silhouette down here
A silhouette of a memory of a solitary night
Nothing more...

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Comment by: - 2006-03-17 07:10
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A very moving articulation of loss and rejection.. you capture the feeling ver well.
Comment by: - 2006-03-17 02:49
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Love is like this, they will tell you it gets better, but rejection never feels good.

Beautiful work.

Respect,

Wraith
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