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TO BE A MAN

To be a man; it to possess the strength
To love one another ,
Not the need to dominate over another


To be a man;
Is to experience the courage
To accept another
Not the compulsion to be an aggressor

To be a man;Is to keep faith with human,
Values in relationships
Not to value oneself by position or possession


To be a man;
Is to be free to give love and care
And to accept love in returns.

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Comment by: - 2006-04-10 03:52
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Amen. I look forward to reading more of your work if it is just a hint of the message carried here. Cool.
Comment by: - 2006-04-04 10:38
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I think the ideas here are very noble, and therefore all the more worth saying. I think it might need a little brushing up (like "love in return" rather than "love in returns" maybe) but otherwise not bad. ^_^
auscowster Comment by: auscowster - 2006-03-17 06:49
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I felt it a bit rough in parts, but that may just be me. Some nice qualities here we should all try to adopt
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