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Funkylele
Daniele Ponzi
Canada, Ontario, Toronto

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Passion is the New Black

Passion
Looks good on everything,
Like a long kiss.

Passion
Is the new black,
Hip with infinity,
Brimming brooding intensity,
Coloured by joy.

Passion
Is a deadly weapon
Lethal with Life and Promise.
It inflicts the unsuspecting victim
With additional dimensions
Heretofore unknown,
Strangely familiar,
Bending you into cooler shapes.
A bigger sense of You
Embracing everything,
To feel it
Squeezing back
With knowing recognition.

Passion
Is so fucking cool
It's like wearing
The Matrix Overcoat,
In slow motion,
Floating on a dancefloor
Breathing out fire and funk.

Passion is
The orgasm that
Doesnt end.

Passion
Is the Dragon.

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MEA da POET Comment by: MEA da POET - 2007-02-13 12:01
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I love this drop! You are alwaya hearing whatever is "in" is the new black! And so true PASSION does look good on everything and one. You words create a beauitful imagery. I look forward to reading more.
lolly Comment by: lolly - 2006-09-03 14:05
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so fucking cool was my favorite part. reminds me of an old elton john/bernie taupin song about writing called Bitter Fingers. thanks for leaving it right where it belongs. Lolly
Comment by: - 2006-07-31 14:08
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I adore "passion is the dragon". Have to be honest "so fucking cool" was a bit juvenille sounding for the overall write, in my opinion. You have expressed passion very well, it is obvious you are a passsionate man with great intelligence. Well done, you are always a joy to read. _Leah
Comment by: - 2006-03-18 22:56
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passion is indeed the orgasm that doesn't end. I can dig it.
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2006-03-17 08:10
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"Passion
Is the Dragon." Those few words summed it all up very well. Nice close to a good poem.
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