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gothtearsdarknes
Crimson Brassfield
United States, I Stand Alone, In The Dark

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Vampire's Rave

Midnight blue
Heels, Shirt, Skirt
Black
Fishnets, Nails, Hair
Red
Eyes, attitude
Into the raving crowd
The very middle
The very attention getting middle
Bodies gyrating with the music
A tribute to the rythym
Where noone knows who is what
And noone really
CARES
At all
You can blend without trying to blend
But stick out in the shadows
Why stay in the shadows when most of the room is dark?
As I said
Noone cares about anything right now
AT ALL

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Comment by: - 2006-05-19 08:21
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very goth. cool poem.
dvdtomkins Comment by: dvdtomkins - 2006-05-18 23:54
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good i liked it
steelblue71 Comment by: steelblue71 - 2006-03-17 18:27
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HOW COULD YOU EVEN THINK ABOUT GIVING UP WRITING????? YOU ARE SOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!
Comment by: - 2006-03-17 16:07
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a real gothic groove to this.. I like the first few lines especially
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