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HARANGUE
what is that means?
when u are not there
is there for u to help you
to make things perfect ,sure and good
rely on him because he cares for you.
ho lonely, ho lonely;
im loney and bored without a friend
like you; just to have fun ?keep me on?
im incomplete in your shark absent
maybe because i need somebody like u
somebody that can make things happen
somebody that we can rubb mind together and
get the perfect judgment of what life and love mean
keep me on;i want to move on
but i can stil lmake things work out
but you need to to know
but you need to seek
but you most be curious
about what love means
i care ,i love ,i cherish...
keep me cool and on...
i need you now...
i love u.
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Comment by: - 2006-04-10 03:54
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| I think it is just wonderful. I am not the best interpreter in the world, I know. Let me just say that faith will take you to her. Keep writing my friend. |
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"A Very Special Child"
God takes some sweetness from the Cherubs, music from the birds, laughter from the dolphins, and wraps them in love from the mother, placing them all carefully into the spirit of the unborn babe; a beautiful gift of life waiting to be placed in the arms of adoptive parents.
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