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No Other Feeling (revised)
My greatest pain, my greatest joy,
I brought life into the world.
The warmth of this tiny human
against my bare chest
could match no other feeling
I had ever felt before.
My greatest pain, my greatest joy,
I laid in that room alone.
Holding my child
so close to my heart
could match no other feeling
I had ever felt before.
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| simple, yet powerful. I raised my first son on my own,too. I can honestly relate. |
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Comment by: sudipal - 2007-04-22 14:09
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| Awww..... A mother's love is like no other. |
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Comment by: Tayo - 2006-12-21 05:14
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Nice work.
Love your description. |
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| This is a simple but nice description about an experience I never had, although I have three children. Seems like the perfect birth, you were lucky and I guess still are. |
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Comment by: - 2006-04-08 01:39
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| Yes this is real, simple but effective. From one mum to another well done.-B |
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