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sambidhan
Sambidhan Acharya
Nepal, Kathmandu, Kathmandu

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I a Prostitute

I a prostitute
-Sambidhan Acharya


I was touched, raped and tortured many times,
Don't please, don't touch me,

I am not a human now
Now am dead machine
Machine which feels when money is fed
So, I tell please don't touch me,

I feel patting paws and hunting eyes hunting for me,
I feel all the eagle eyes hunting for my private parts,
Why a man is scavenger?
Why are they so hungry for flesh, I wonder?

My husband whom I thought would keep me
Sold me here in the bazaar of flesh eaters,
Now I see all the men the incarnation of devil,
All the women, the slave of these flesh eaters,

When anyone touches me with love nowadays,
I feel his hands are of lust,
When I am today rescued feel the person wants my blood
I want to finish all of those who try to eat us,

Please don't touch me I tell him although he is rescuer,
I am turned to a money feeder stone I tell him when he asks me for why?

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countrybumpkin Comment by: countrybumpkin - 2006-03-19 23:54
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I think there is a lot of pain and strugle inside of you I read this in your work, I can see you are trying hard to express yourself but are having trouble with your english, but keep up the good work I can see beyond it
Comment by: - 2006-03-19 13:08
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This reads with an accent, which is rather nice actually. I was moved by the selling to flesh eaters by your husband....this is a strong write and testimony to survival inspite of damage. Wonderful poem. - Leah
Khema Comment by: Khema - 2006-03-19 07:56
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this piece is intensely moving. i feel that certain parts are unclear, however such as "I am turned to a money feeder stone I tell him when he asks me for why?", perhaps some punctuation might help, or altering the structure. K~
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