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YOU HAVE TO KNOW HIM
are you there to help?
are you there mostly needed
some hearts are poor
some heart have been hurted
by some ;callous,heartless lover...
are you there to help?
what you make happen to other God
will make happen to you.
make a good friendship
be honest,ready to help
dont defraud
dont be a scamer
be a good friend
a good citizen that seek
the growth of the country
be there to help,to love
to care, to encourage, to exhalt other
when they feel blue,
show how you love
when they fall pull them up
make a positive impact.
do away with evil things
then he will accept you
come and know him,because he cares
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Comment by: - 2006-04-04 10:45
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Again, very good themes, but in honesty it could probably use a little fixing English-wise. I wish I could help more, but I don't know much about poetry in particular.
But for example...
are you there to help?
are you there when you're needed
some hearts are poor
some hearts have been hurt
by some ;callous,heartless lover...
are you there to help?
what you do onto to others God
will do unto to you.
make a strong friendship
be honest,ready to help
dont defraud
dont be a scamer
be a good friend
a good citizen that seeks
the growth of the country
be there to help,to love
to care, to encourage, to exhalt others
when they feel blue,
show how you care
when they fall pull them up
make a positive impact.
do away with evil things
then he will accept you
come and know him,because he cares
... something like that? Just some ideas. |
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A collection of lyrics that work for country, opera, R&B, rock&roll, jazz, gospel, hip hop set to poetry.
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