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Funkylele
Daniele Ponzi
Canada, Ontario, Toronto

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Comments: 7

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One Becomes Two

The bright neon nerves
Of all our Saturday nights,
Our souls joined at the hips
As we devoured life
Fade in the light of
Our Sunday Afternoon.

Whispers and Echoes
Haunt me when my mind
Grows still.
Your eyes in mine,
Your hands in mine,
We wrote a song
The world will never sing.

Somehow eternity
Comes to an end,
Infinity is measured
Step by step
And the most beautiful
And perfect words we ever spoke
Our vows,
Are done.

Intensity
comes at a price
And Poems cut.
I bleed my words
And tear myself to tears
To voice my love,
My pain, my loss.
My willingness to feel
And feel again
When common sense
Is screaming please go numb!

To honour all our beauty
Without grief,
To learn from all our failings
Without guilt,
To savour every memory
As a thing complete unto itself
A finished gleaming work of art
That needs no other touch...

This is my prayer!

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Khema Comment by: Khema - 2008-01-07 16:01
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wowie....i had not seen this....i felt it in the circus mirror of my heart.
tcbswan Comment by: tcbswan - 2006-08-28 19:21
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wonderful, lovely,and completely engrossing! wow! beautiful and compelling work.
t.
Comment by: - 2006-08-24 06:13
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When common sense
Is screaming please go numb!

This is very true for so many of us. We wish to stay numb instead of feeling anything. I enjoyed this poem because of the many things you say here. It is very hard to let go even when something is hurting you.

Enrique
Comment by: - 2006-07-31 14:10
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I feel the tension and release so entangled it holds me captive. I understand your desire to honor what was and forget what damaged its purity. This was truly splendid. - Leah
denisedee Comment by: denisedee - 2006-03-22 05:20
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WOW! love the mix of bliss and despair in this poem. A lot to absorb here, but on first read, I like how it feels in my body.
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