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billiethakid
Billie ThaKid
United States, Georgia, Atlanta

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Odious Crown-Heads

Two generations of hush

Never speaking anything but mush

Causing the collapse of great Empires like Cush

So stupid and deranged they continue to play push

Toppling calamity in a rush

Spewing venom in a gush

As rotten as a pussy ain't never seen a douche

Yeah that's them crown-head mothafuckas they callin 'president bush'.

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Comment by: - 2006-09-03 19:59
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That was amazing...I love the way that you can incorporate the foul language so well into the poem...I love it
mothernature Comment by: mothernature - 2006-09-03 13:59
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i agree but foul language just doesnt seem to do it for me .not in general conversation or poetry.but you are a teacher of words i wish i was as educated as you to be able to use such magnificent words.(mostly in your other works and in your profile)
Comment by: - 2006-09-02 14:11
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Way to speak your mind...fortunately I agree with you.

Best Wishes, JEnnifer PInick
Comment by: - 2006-06-25 23:04
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kool shit
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