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An Insatiable Necessity
Oh, do you miss being kissed?
Do you secretly reminisce over that lovely, sweet wetness?
The way tongues intermingling
Cause a deep, very much-needed inner tingling
Mmm, an insatiable necessity
Is the lack thereof beginning to agitate thee?
That soft fullness that evokes beautiful passion
If only love allotted even a fraction of a ration
Then your heart would not be forced to depend upon fantasies so intense
Of your lover blessing you with a deliciously tantalizing, hungry, wet kiss
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Comment by: stu8rt - 2006-11-04 01:23
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| "if only love alloted even a fraction of a ration" rolls off the tongue like cunnilingus... Mmmm indeed. |
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Comment by: tcbswan - 2006-09-05 20:47
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| absolutely love this poem, the images, the sound of it is so appealing--and what a tease for the senses. well done. going to my bookself immediately! |
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Comment by: - 2006-09-02 14:12
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You write so truly and with passion. The two poems I've read so far have been about subjects I've never seen attempted before...
You're GReat.
JEnnifer PInick |
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| A very nice poem! Have you ever read John Donne's "A Valediction: Forbidding Mourning." It's a longer piece with the same theme you have in your poem about lovers not needing the physical to stay in love. |
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Comment by: - 2006-06-24 12:52
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| I don't remember when I had a kiss described like that before! |
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