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frenchifreak
frenchifreak
United States, Washington

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Shopping Spree at Midnight

Prada Shoes impatiently tap the concrete.
Drenched in gems from my hair to my toes.
The last thing I want is to be
confronted by shady characters
who would be hypnotized by the rocks
I call diamonds.
The dark sky is graffitied with stars.
My inky black hair blends with the night
and creates a perfect camouflage.

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mrose Comment by: mrose - 2008-04-30 04:21
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really good. subtle imagery and quite descriptive in so few words.
drchase Comment by: drchase - 2007-11-19 12:06
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im feeling this...it short and still effective...maad good imagery...cool beans
Elucidate Comment by: Elucidate - 2007-06-29 10:33
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I like this=) very clear in the image it creates
ArtemisOnFire888 Comment by: ArtemisOnFire888 - 2007-06-05 10:14
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Short and sweet and perhaps painful from deep within? Going unrecognized by others, or unseen as the woman you wish to show by the side of physical beauty? And perhaps I haven't touched base with your feelings at all. But I love how straight to the point you are. Lovely.
popeye Comment by: popeye - 2007-02-23 13:57
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i agree with the writers below. This piece is absoultely brillant, yOUR IMAGERY is powerful, thus, it engages the reader. WELL DONE......
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