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I Won't Deny
Lyrical - needs to be condensed and ryhmed more for radio quality so this is the initial work
I Won't Deny
I was driving down the highway the other day
and saw the real Elvis just passing me by
in that same instant I turned to look to the crimson sun,
but instead I saw 4 rainbow colored flying nuns
Surely this is a dream from which I need to wake.
It could be that my mind needs a mental break.
I was walking in the market I thought I saw my fathers face,
but that is something that only heaven could grace
I was awakened the other day by another persons scent
I'm convinced that it was the ghost of the future through time was bent
Hope is a strange thing it can make you both alive and insane.
I have seen through a visionary's mind makes everything else look plain
If you saw love like mine would you give it a new name?
Because baby the way I feel about you I will never see anything else the same.
And
My love for you is a truth I won't deny
My love for you is a truth I won't deny
Oh...Oh ...and I won't deny
Maybe I am a fool, but a truthful fool am I
I am not going to forget about the way I first fell into your eyes
In that instant I returned to a kind of happiness that brought tears of joy that I'd cry
I have not been the same since then
I had been only living off an angel's prayer that seem at first like a sin
Put your palm up to mine and stop this revolving door named time
I put my heart up in your mirror for you to find
Traces of me for you everywhere, like bread crumbs left behind
And
My love for you is a truth I won't deny
My love for you is a truth I won't deny
Oh .Oh ..and I won't deny
You say that all the other love stories pales to compare in what we share
A life without your love is a life I could not bear
I look to the days we can share our salty sweet
There is only one thing in this life to make a person complete.
I feel like I climbed a mountain to be high enough to kiss a Gods forehead
and I don't know if I will ever come down again except to meet in your bed.
It won't be long after that I feel like I took flight in your hearts beat
Because baby you give me the one thing to make a person complete
And ..
My love for you is a truth I won't deny
My love for you is a truth I won't deny
Oh Oh ..and I won't deny
And to think I saw it all in your eyes
Love ...Love never dies
K
March 2006
Rough Draft
Copyright © 2006 Spaded Heart. All Rights Reserved
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| awe thanks ..! If only I could condense it .. |
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| Really good, and I could almost hear the tune playing along as I read. |
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| how long? smiles |
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Comment by: lofty - 2006-04-14 16:28
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love it,love it,love it,love it
LOVE IT. |
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| awe thank you for loving it .. I need plenty of that |
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