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Comment by: - 2006-04-04 19:10
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| wow. this is a great poem. i always wished i was a pisces. |
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An extremely effective, but yet peculiar rhyming device you have used....hmmmmmm very interesting. Every fifth line beginning from the second line rhymes- skillfully done.
Great anthropomorphic descriptions/ metaphors of fish being ableto dream.I guess you Pisces are still fishes if you can imagine the sea swirl around you!
Cool! |
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Intresting take on astrology.
May be more effective if you split the lines into stanzas according to their rhyme patterns. |
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Love the poem. Many of my friends are Pisces rising or Pisces moons and besides being psychic, they all share the trait of having luminous skin - which i see also poesess.
Not sure you need the last two lines here. |
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| How I love Pisces. I love that you just gave me a look in. |
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