| Reviews and Critiques on EditRed
| | I ought to be posting the next poetry challenge right now and choosing the winner for last month's challenges. But before I can get down to that, I've got to get this off my chest. When I joined... | | Blogs | | Genre: | rant | | Updated: | 01-10-08 |
| Words: | 770 | | Comments: | 4 | | Status: | Public |
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| Journey
| | still under editing... A few final rays of sunlight peep over the tops of the trees and sometimes they momentarily blind me as I speed along the almost empty road and there's nothing in my way... | | Words: | 530 | | Comments: | 25 | | Status: | Public |
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| Peter
| | Smoke rose from the body like summer morning mist, promise of heat to follow. That it was going to... | | Words: | 205 | | Comments: | 10 | | Status: | Public |
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| Julia's Treasure
| | William grabbed the water nymph by the hair as she tried to dive beneath the surface.... | | Words: | 187 | | Comments: | 7 | | Status: | Public |
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| Suite 10.1
| | Josh Heath walked over to the window, clutching the back of his neck as if all his frustration... | | Words: | 6428 | | Comments: | 2 | | Status: | Reader |
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| Fortress
| | Rapunzel stared at the ceiling. Lying on the bed, she percieved her paralysed body as a fortress,... | | Words: | 267 | | Comments: | 12 | | Status: | Public |
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| The Mermaid
| | I am delirious,... | | Words: | 128 | | Comments: | 9 | | Status: | Public |
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| cast iron bird
| | frost-cracked in two... | | Words: | 17 | | Comments: | 8 | | Status: | Public |
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| Passion Spath
| | She called me Passion. It was nothing to do with my dad, wherever, whoever he is.... | | Words: | 133 | | Comments: | 10 | | Status: | Public |
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| The Felling
| | You died standing... | | Words: | 119 | | Comments: | 4 | | Status: | Reader |
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| Dissonances by Nigel McLoughlin
| Dissonances, Nigel McLoughlin Bluechrome, 2007 An engaging read, Nigel... | | Book Reviews | | Genre: | review | | Updated: | 07-05-08 |
| Words: | 810 | | Comments: | 0 | | Status: | Public |
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| Rose
| | v2.1... | | Words: | 191 | | Comments: | 13 | | Status: | Public |
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| Her Muse
| | He sings to her in Spanish and his voice,... | | Words: | 111 | | Comments: | 17 | | Status: | Reader |
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| River
| | Imagine I’m a river flowing fast... | | Words: | 109 | | Comments: | 19 | | Status: | Reader |
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| Cast Away
| | Island sunset, tropical illusion.... | | Words: | 268 | | Comments: | 5 | | Status: | Public |
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| Renaissance Prayer
| | Dusty histories await inspection,... | | Words: | 186 | | Comments: | 11 | | Status: | Reader |
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| Life Gets in the Way
| | A cold bluster whips up a stray piece of paper. A tiny mouse darts into a hole beneath one of the sleepers. I stand in the background, waiting, studying the two forlorn tracks leading away from me in... | | Words: | 1640 | | Comments: | 6 | | Status: | Reader |
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| Moths
| | Orb of sacred light... | | Words: | 32 | | Comments: | 16 | | Status: | Public |
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| Writing Poetry | Part 3: Writing from Life
| | Everything we write is informed by our lives. ??Word for word? truth comes up against an ??expression? of the truth Often, poetry about our lives can be based upon sensory experiences (sight, sounds,... | | Words: | 447 | | Comments: | 7 | | Status: | Public |
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| Writing Poetry | Part 1: The Hardest Part of Writing a Poem
| | What is the Hardest Part of Writing a Poem? * Thinking of a subject/theme to write about? * Figuring out an original approach to the subject/theme? * Deciding what kind of form to write the poem in? *... | | Words: | 580 | | Comments: | 8 | | Status: | Public |
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