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Teri Teri
Teri Davis Rouvelas
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Hello,

I'm so excited. *wriggles*

http://www.insolentrudder.net/

Thank you to everyone who helped me with that story and for everything else you've done. I really appreciate all the assistance you've given.

Teri xo





decaturboy
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30/09/2007
Congratulations, Teri! Excellent work and a wonderful accomplishment.

Here's to many more!

RJWilliams
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30/09/2007
A great piece of Flash-fiction Teri. I loved reading it!

Continued success!

RJ

Teri
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30/09/2007
Thanks, Jim and RJ. I got so excited, I called Enrique in Spain. I forgot about the time difference. He sounded very sleepy.

Oh, I really am excited. With this and SmokeLong, I'm wriggling so hard, the bed's halfway across the room. And it's not on wheels.

*shuts up*

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30/09/2007
Congrats, Teri.


"A trip to that moon is as safe as going to the circus." I went to the circus with my mom once. On the way home, she drove off the road and parked my dad's one ton dual-wheeled truck on a concrete median wall. Because of that, this statement made me giggle. I just thought I'd share.

Congratulations, again.

Teri
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30/09/2007
Thank you, Des. And that sounds like how I drive. haha I'm glad that part made you giggle, though.

If anyone wants to know how bad my voice really is, E reminded me I sounded like the mouse in this cartoon when I called him tonight.

Mouse Knuckles

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30/09/2007
Hooray! What a cool story--if a little disturbing. ^_^ Congratulations.

decaturboy
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30/09/2007
Teri, you sound like that? Coincidentally, I sound like Mulligan.

DamienDread
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01/10/2007
Well done, darling. I wish you continued success. D.Dread

karjon
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01/10/2007
Well done, Teri - it's ages since I read that story - the latest version is great.

Cheers

Karen

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01/10/2007
I'm so happy for you Teri.
Congratulations to you
Congratulations to you
Congratulations dear Teri
Congratulations to you

And Many MOOOOOOOOORE!

JenJunky
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01/10/2007
Congratulations, Teri! Nicely done, as usual.

Verdi

Nora
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01/10/2007
damned brilliant read, and creepy, too, you evil genius.

i'm so proud of you, 'eri, you FPW, you.

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01/10/2007
Yay. That's wonderful, Teri. So well deserved. Wriggle all you want, we all would in your shoes.

flack47
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01/10/2007
Nicely done, T-money.
That's why you're the bomb.

digs
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01/10/2007
Congrats, Teri. Great stuff.
Digby
xx

Teri
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01/10/2007
Thanks again. *still wriggling*

"""Teri, you sound like that? Coincidentally, I sound like Mulligan."""

Yup. E calls me Raton de Moco [Snot Mouse] after Sniffles, the mouse in the cartoon. And you sound like Mulligan? Oh, dear, I think I'd rather sound like Sniffles. Like I have a choice. *eats cheese*

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01/10/2007
Congrats, Teri. Loved the bio, by the way. Especially that last line.

dlynn
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01/10/2007
How sweet it is...Yeah Teri!
Great job on your story.
Congrats!

zambr000
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01/10/2007
you rock you rock you roooock!!

:-)
m

Teri
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01/10/2007
MARIOOOO!!!! haha

Thanks. And thank you, Guin and Diane. *dancing*

[And I really do hate writing third person bios. They're usually sooooo boring and pretentious. So I make jokes.]

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01/10/2007
Third-person bios make me feel real uncomfortable, like the old drunk at the bar down the street who sniffs the seat of my barstool when I get up.

Anyways, congrats!

Mitch wrote:
"Nicely done, T-money.
That's why you're the bomb."

I like to think that T-Money is short for something, like maybe T-Dizzle Money Bags Franklin.

Teri
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01/10/2007
I know. Third person bios sound so lame usually, too. 'Teri was born' - well, ya think???

I think I know what my next one will be:

Teri was born in etc.
Teri went to school etc.
Teri's work appeared in etc.
Teri loves to etc. in her spare time.
Teri lives in etc.
Teri adores the abbreviation etc.

Whatcha think?

Meh ... you gotta find a new bar, Lydia.

T-Dizzle xo
PW
FPW
SMHH

LydiaRiley
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01/10/2007
This bar is within walking distance. And the pool tables are only fifty cents a game. AND you get ten plays per dollar on the jukebox. Plus, I've met some interesting people there. There was this manic-depressive writer with Alzheimer's who LOVED to read his poetry to people, which was just truly awful. I mean...wow. And because he had Alzheimer's, every time you saw him he'd read you the same wretched poems because he didn't remember doing it before. I ended up using it to torture my friends for my own amusement...I would introduce them to him and casually ask him if he'd written anything new lately, which would invariably result in yet another terrible barroom oration. The kicker to this is that I would stroll away, leaving my friend to fend for themselves against ole Shakespeare and his poems.

Maybe this is why no one wants to be my friend...

Teri, what do all these initials stand for? I feel so left out.

Post edited on: 01/10/2007 08:37:40 PM

Teri
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01/10/2007
Check your mail, but go potty first.

Teri
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01/10/2007
PS - And I'll be your friend.

LydiaRiley
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01/10/2007
Yay! A friend! This is even better than the time I paid for one pop from the vending machine and got two. Or the time my class went on a field trip to the starch factory in fifth grade!

Teri
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01/10/2007
Starch factory? Oh, you have GOT to write a story about that. And about the other stuff you mentioned before.

And thanks for comparing my friendship to a starch factory field trip. *sobs* And why do they call them field trips? It's not like you actually go to a field.

Well, maybe in Kansas they have to. *points at Mitchell and laffs*

Post edited on: 01/10/2007 09:26:11 PM

flack47
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02/10/2007
Come on! It's not like I live in Oklahoma or something.


mafsa
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02/10/2007
genius!

congratulations to you, Miss Teri, and more masterpieces to come!

Mary:p

LydiaRiley
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02/10/2007
Teri wrote:
"Starch factory? Oh, you have GOT to write a story about that. And about the other stuff you mentioned before."

Ha! What a crappy, God-awful field trip...the starch factory. Other than the fact that they drug us there for a field trip, there's nothing amusing about it. It's so not scribe-worthy.

And actually, in high school I went on a field trip to the New Theatre Restaurant in Overland Park, Kansas...I dunno what the play was, but Jamie Farr was in it.

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02/10/2007
How about a story where the class bully fell into the starch vat and ended up being shipped to a commercial laundry service? Call it "Iggie and the Starch Factory."

flack47
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02/10/2007
Call it "A Stiff Punishment"

decaturboy
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02/10/2007
Touche', Mitch.

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