My Wife's Car @ Edit Red Writing Community

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jjsmith
Martin Chipperfield
Australia

i was lying on the couch a moment ago
(it's a sunday morning here in adelaide)

and i couldnt help hearing someone on a cell phone
(they were talking loud so you know they are on the phone)

and i caught this fragment
"do you want to get my wife's car?"

so then i started thinking
he must be talking to someone he doesnt know very well
otherwise he would have said something like
do you want to get Julia's car?
and then i started thinking
who was he talking to?
where was his wife's car?
where was his wife?
all that

all you creative writers
surely you can come up with the story???

jjsmith E-mail this user Add to Readers 08/12/2007	a kind of a challenge, what?

karjon E-mail this user Add to Readers 08/12/2007	Ooh - I like this, JJ. I may well have to give this a go.

tcbswan E-mail this user Add to Readers 08/12/2007	hummmmmm--i'll jump on board what's the cut off? is there a deadline?

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