nadinesellers
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15/02/2008 | nadine sellers here, have been hungry for big critique, thick and replete with spice. just go to my page and drop your cursor in the middle, there's need spelled everywhere. i'm hiding in NW MO. hope to read you soon. |
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lancslass
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15/02/2008 | Bucho, here's a short story I would really like some good thick comments on. Thanks so much. Anna
Riding Home
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Kalin
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15/02/2008 | I know this is all wrong and I can't put my finger how. My intention was to build the character through the eyes of a 2nd person, but -even though I can't find a better way to write it -as I read it, I'm left un-interested. If you're so thirsty, tear it apart -I'd appreciate it.
Following the Stranger |
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vlclasby
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16/02/2008 | Hi Bucho! Be careful what you ask for...
I have the first three chapters of Barely a Trace, if you're just horribly bored. Thanks for any help you can provide! |
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karjon
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16/02/2008 | There you go, sir:
Colouring In
And drop me a line with the name of the piece on which you're most in need of feedback so I can return the favour asap.
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Bucho
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16/02/2008 | oh i definitely don't NEED any critiques on anything right now...i've actually had a nice influx of critiques on my stuff recently, which is why i'm askin for pieces to comment on myself. ;)
i'll get to everything tomorrow...my inbox got inundated as well, but i'm gonna start with these here in the thread ;) |
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RJWilliams
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16/02/2008 | Well, you can look at my wee challenges. |
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TirzahLaughs
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16/02/2008 | Sure, sure..anything you want. |
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HollyHeroin
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16/02/2008 | I’m new to the site and have gotten a couple of comments but not many “critiques” your's (or anyone’s) thoughts on my work would be appreciated.
Post edited on: 16/02/2008 09:57:37 PM |
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driftersonline
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16/02/2008 | Gas Beer and Cheeseburgers
www.driftersonline.com/gbc |
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Mick
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17/02/2008 | Bucho! Check it out |
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champagne
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17/02/2008 | I'm sure you've got more than enough on your slate by now but, you never did check in on this one. If you're still bored, take a peek please.
Post edited on: 17/02/2008 02:48:48 PM |
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ATF
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17/02/2008 | If you can get around to it, I REALLY need some feedback on my ‘work-in-progress.’ I have one story here at Edit Red, in three parts so far. The first part, I am no longer happy with and plan to tweak a bit, but I think the story picks up in the 2nd and 3rd parts. The fourth will be added with the next couple of days.
Please have a look at it if you can. |
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symonnetorpy
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17/02/2008 | READ ME.. any piece.. i need help *tries to get out of straight jacket* |
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marzipan
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21/02/2008 | I just uploaded my first piece, which I'm revising for a grade in my creative nonfiction class. I'm a returning student - 39 years old and LOVING school and writing. I can't claim to be a terrific writer but I would absolutely welcome any suggestions about the piece I have posted. |
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champagne
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21/02/2008 | Bucho, Thanks for your recent feedback on my story. We're lucky to have you reading and commenting. |
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